As, they do not have much knowledge about. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence. Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT ll not be able to obtain ample amount of information from the fossils as they wil. Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE sils are with wealthier collectors then general public would not be able to view the fossils a. author believes that the fossils should belongs to scientific experts and museums. Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'belong' Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM In this set of materials, the reading and lecture both are discus. Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE However, there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which informa 65 TPO-46 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms.In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: the 60 How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes.This holds true for species ranging from dinosaurs to most mammals. TPO-45 - Integrated Writing Task Any student of paleontology will be struck by the fact that a great many animals of the past were considerably larger than they are today.Steller, a naturalist who was among the first Europeans to see 27 TPO-34 - Integrated Writing Task A huge marine mammal known as Steller’s sea cow once lived in the waters around Bering Island off the coast of Siberia.TOEFL integrated writing: Dutch painter Rembrandt 61.Thus, in fear of missing valuable information the discovery of fossil will remain unearthed. Scientists and other institution do not have enough funding to work on multiple excavation projects. While, the speaker claims that even though, some details might be missed the rich people are the only source of money for such projects of excavation. As, they do not have much knowledge about the fossils they will overlook the important details. So, they will not miss the opportunity to study the fossil or miss out any information regarding the fossil.įinally, the passage contends that unprofessional wealthy fossil seekers will destroy valuable scientific evidence. On the other hand, the professor posits that usually after the discovery of fossil, it is first studied by a scientist to know about it's authenticity. Schools and library will display them for the public.įurthermore, the author states that scientists will not be able to obtain ample amount of information from the fossils as they will not get assess to fossils to study them. On the contrary, the speaker argues that people will have greater opportunity to view these fossils. He mentions that the disadvantages mentioned in passage about ownership of fossils to rich collectors outweigh the advantages.įirst of all, the writer posits that if fossils are with wealthier collectors then general public would not be able to view the fossils and will lose interest to study them. The lecture cast doubt on all the points mentioned in the passage. The author believes that the fossils should belongs to scientific experts and museums. In this set of materials, the reading and lecture both are discussing about ownership of fossils.